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slight tweak
sazdawn | Thu, 06/14/2012 - 03:51
Brief from client
just gave it a slight tweak to try and improve showing what my buinees is about
I see the idea, but it needs to be more developed. the "J" in the symbol almost looks like an "S". Think about giving the concept more depth without adding clutter. The title type is okay, but a little dull.
I see what you're trying to do here, but I don't think the typography, or use of letters on the logo itself are working. The kerning needs a little work. The colors need to be adjusted a bit as well.
This is a little bit better than the previous version, but I didn't even realize until I read the comments here that it was supposed to be a C and a J! I'd go with something more along the lines of what geraco suggested! The middle one is my favorite. (And I'm sorry for my review of the other logo - I didn't realize that you're not a graphic designer by trade!)
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I see the idea, but it needs to be more developed. the "J" in the symbol almost looks like an "S". Think about giving the concept more depth without adding clutter. The title type is okay, but a little dull.
Just some examples trying to help you to get ideas
you have a very good idea here just improve your symbol and your choice of colors just my thought =)
I see what you're trying to do here, but I don't think the typography, or use of letters on the logo itself are working. The kerning needs a little work. The colors need to be adjusted a bit as well.
This is a little bit better than the previous version, but I didn't even realize until I read the comments here that it was supposed to be a C and a J! I'd go with something more along the lines of what geraco suggested! The middle one is my favorite. (And I'm sorry for my review of the other logo - I didn't realize that you're not a graphic designer by trade!)