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Snail mail api

Mniako | Sat, 03/29/2014 - 21:35

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A simple logo for little webpage with specific api. Snail mail api.

Is this version better?

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heymie15 | Tue, 04/01/2014 - 02:03
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This is just my opinion and me being honest...
I think the lines in the snail part of your mark look a little rushed. I see what you are going for, standing next to the script type, but for some reason the script looks a lot cleaner than the snail part. Maybe try smoothing out some areas that are causing it to appear pointed in some parts. Or start with an even stroke, convert it to outlines, then make small tweaks.
Hope that helps!

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mahayni | Mon, 04/07/2014 - 07:13
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It reads better now.
Do you want to have all the letters sitting on the same baseline?

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