Top-Vip Lan House
Kuja-Hin | Fri, 05/13/2016 - 01:08
Brief from client
A gaming lan-house logo.
A second version without much of those effects and this time using another color(Orange).
Im also reworking the mouse cable. Im still not satisfied with it so I ended up removing it for now.
8 Comments
Same thing here. Also, can you make the logo a bit bigger ? It's not looking bad at all, but it would help us giving you an in-depth feedback.
My bad. I edited it.
Way better!
Okay, the colour scheme on this one I think is better suited to the business, and it stands out a lot more. So, points for colours here.
I like the mouse cord in the other version.
Everything needs a good simplify though. For example, the stripes in the mouse cord? Those are just complicated for the sake of being complicated. It would be stronger simplified.
Okay...I know this must just be me, but do you see a mouse wearing sunglasses either wearing a hat or with black trump hair? I must be losing it.
HA!! I see it!!!
As I said, this is looking pretty good.
The one thing I don't like is the mouse. It looks too detailed, like a technical illustration. I think you don't really need it. The fact it's in a 3/4 perspective view is clashing with the other elements and the centered composition.
Now, here's an idea you might to try if you want to keep a mouse in there. Look at your shield. Doesn't it already look like a mouse? ;)
Great work on the color scheme, this one and the purple one. You definitely have a great sense for it.
Maybe I would reword the subtext so it fits the whole design better.
One detail that could be fixed to is the back background behind the word mark which matches the shape of the characters below but not above.
This is off to a great start. Keep it up!
I also think the mouse is too complicated
jador