Tour the Lake Ohrid
Brief from client
There was no brief.

Tour the Lake Ohrid - Road Cycling Competition around the Lake Ohrid, Macedonia [100_km]. Officially realized for the first time on 21st of June 2010 - the Day of Lake Ohrid. Branded before its third realization in June 2013.
There was no brief. I noticed this competition event realization for the third time officially. I find its organization having no logo for it. They use to write the title itself for exposing. I created this logo and it was presented a several days before the 3rd realization in June 2013. In position having no logo and no idea of any kind the organization started using it. It is in use in this moment and uploaded on Brands of the World.
The logo was created for free. Yes. I <3 Lake Ohrid.
Thx. for critiques.
BoB.
2 Comments
Sorry but this is not working at all.
Globally, it's way too complicated and very hard to read, especially with that major tilt.
I see what you've tried to do with the symbol but all i see is too googly eyes with a weird shape quickly drawn above it. And the main problem is that it's way too close from the Tour de France logo.
My advice: restart from scratch. Sketch a lot of ideas before using the computer for execution purpose only. Keep it simple.
Good luck and have fun!
I like it overall but think that the symbol is a little unclear as to what it actually is - it doesn't say bike to me, and although I like the font generally, think that you could pick a far superior sans serif font.