watchtv productions

Although good ideas often come while were on the can (and this is a good idea), the execution is... pardon the pun... a little crappy. The watch looks like a cheap Timex and the TV doesn't like like a TV.

I like the idea and agree with above you need to work on cleaning up you symbol. I think your type works fine, you just have some spacing issues like the space in TV needs to be the same as the spacing in Watch

I would work on tag line. When it is an inch tall you wont be able to read it, its a good start though

yes although its quite literal and easy to pull off you have done a good job with this so far. I like the watch TV font but not the tagline one. It also needs to be a bit bigger like stated above. I prefer it a lot better than your second submission as this one is a lot clearer and to the point. But work on he actual logo mark though as I feel it is not strong enough at the moment.

I actually disagree I'm afraid I don't think its a good idea and think it needs to be scrapped asap! My best advice is don't be SO literal! Use some typographic skills to get standard but if you do like it then potentially look at something like this where it is marginally subtler.