April

The idea is not bad, but - this is my advise - forget the brush line, it's too weak.
Why the colors in the P and the dot on the i? And why these colors?
The bottom font is too far from the tagline, put it closer and align right to the end of the april.And you can make a better wavy line.
Let's see another version.

I think the concept is good, but the I don't see elegant final result. Where the lines cross looks like something under construction rather than flowing gracefully. You might trying removing the paths where the lines cross and make the characters in "april" not completely closed, but taper the lines to create a fade. The color treatment resembles a bulls-eye or target. The type in the tag isn't very unique and takes away from the main image.

Hmmmm sorry people, but this one i realy like! I just take off the color on the i dot.

it's not bad in my opinion. but i think u need to touch this up some where, i feel like it needs a bit more touch up work to this. perhaps fixing the april design a bit. i think the thick to thin or vice versa isn't working as well as it should.