Personal Logo
BrendanLloydDesign | Wed, 06/05/2013 - 21:17
Brief from client
Personal Design Logo for myself
Taking SF-Graphic's critique in this version. I will add an additional version based off the second comment and critique the first version. I changed the font, and added the skinny lines to the back of the letters. I definitely think this gives it a much cleaner look will unifying the letters as well.
5 Comments
Hey Now! :) Im liking this one alot more kinda has that old school industrial feel to it.
I agree! Thank you for the kind words as well :) I do feel like it could use one more element maybe....
old school had best students :P.its a wrong starting from the size of the text down of the letters, should be the same, they must have the same importants or maybe remove them (better). It dont sound like a clean one, even like a intelligent one (just one that blows others mind :P:P) Why the B is upper then the L? i think u must remove the white line of the circle, you dont need that, Dont do the started letter of the text bigger (always if you wont to use them, i think you must not) Bring the main letters at the same level (work with the character, do you think its the one?). The third version dont work at all :)
I wouldn't choose this one as a logo, you are going the wrong way, stop and take a break go to a walk ....your last two logo are complicated in comparison with the first, that's the first sign you got to reevalutate your resources. All thumbs down because the first version was better.
I'm really torn because of all these mixed reviews..... I'm going to upload multiple versions and hopefully most will all agree on one eventually