AT-Fitness Personal Trainer
Shar Dama Ka | Wed, 07/29/2015 - 16:31
Brief from client
A logo for a guy who wants to start his own personal training company, he wanted to incorporate spartans some how. A T are his initials.
I got rid of the T on top and messed around with the mask part to straighten the T out a little more and brought the bottom opening of the mask closer together so the curve wasn't so dramatic, I also lowered the pitch of the A all together. Shortened the whole logo as well and added a little helmet piece on top to make it more noticeable as a spartan mask.
1 Comments
Firstly, ditch that black shape on a fore head of a helmet, as there is no need for that ( helmet itself looks A enough ). Secondly, get rid of that pointy arrow at a top of the helmet, just causing distraction and messing with a clean shape of A , keep it simple. Thirdly, you had a nice motion of a roof of the helmet in your first version - all you need to do is arched a bit, as your sides of helmet are done here. I would keep searching for a different font. Keep it up - you're on a right path now. Good luck.