critique please..
katsudon | Thu, 02/16/2012 - 13:51
Brief from client
TV personality, cookbook writer and blogger, entertaining and style.
Women and men who cook, like interior design, stylish, affluent, lifestyle, educated, aspirational,
circle added to emphasis the hands.
7 Comments
great.
Much better, you have taken on our critique and came up with this. Well done. Iike it but for some reason not feeling the packman style face. Definitely on the right track though.
I second. I think the head sans pacman mouth (like the first submission) is much better. The mouth is too distracting.
i personally think without the pacman it looks rather inactive,impersonal and boring. but that is just me.
also i just noticed. the hat hilights look a little out of order. you might want to work on that a bit.
this is good try to rework the side view face make it real human face.
you almost there good job.and the word food,home and style the gap between is not good change the division each other.
:D Chef PACMAN. lol
Otherwise, clearly shown the developement.
Good work.