Early Coffee
amina_des | Sat, 02/06/2016 - 22:05
Brief from client
Logo for a cafe offering different types of coffee drinks.
One more attempt to improve the logo... Please help by leaving your opinion :)
I changed font, colors, little bit changed wing's direction. Also I liked the idea to place the bird to the left of the text.
5 Comments
what about this one?
Like this one =0)
looking at the earlier versions i see an improvement. Still, making the symbol smaller you lower the impact dramatically, giving the fact the symbol is not a strong one even if big. Colors in this one might save you, but a logo should work on black and white or gray scale pretty much the same as in color. Compensate with shapes, not only with colors.
Don't know if you did it or not, but play with composition, position, scale of the elements. It might help you to put the text on a curvy path above the symbol or making the symbol bigger and put the text inside of it.....play, play, play....
Overall, idea is good, i can see coffee, energy, early, the symbol will get a thumb down- you can do better, typography is neutral, colors are neutral. keep up the good work
Meh. I much preferred the version of the logo with the beak outside, like in version 2 and 3.
The blue/brown scheme can work. I'm not feeling the font and the general composition.
I don't like the bleu bird, too much tweet maybe.
What about something more SunShine colour for it ?