Happy Stache
richadvegajr | Tue, 02/07/2012 - 20:18
Brief from client
Brand yourself
This is a personal logo of mine
I am a very happy go lucky kind of guy and I wanted to represent that in my design I chose happy stache because my friends have told me in the past that I resemble Hispanic version of super Mario brother. The reason behind the monocle is because I see design though a different perspective.
Please give me your honest opinions!
thanks!
4 Comments
I like the idea.
The line of the jaw can go.
The font can be improved. Try a full sans-serif and remove the italic style from "HAPPY", keep it thin. The size of the text needs more volume.
Use only two colors: the monocle and "HAPPY" one color, and "STACHE" and the mustache with another color
typography needs change. to be honest, on a personal level, i was laughing because the first 2 things that came to my mind was, "I Drink Your Milkshake!" and the Monopoly Guy.
But just like luenib said, the typography on this needs improvement and you can lose the jawline. because it will still carry the feature of the mustache and the monocle.
i like it...maybe with a different font but this works
I agree different typography to actually go with the graphic mark to make it that much more recognisable. Interesting though, good execution.