Imperio Barberia
pipe_mrqz | Sat, 02/08/2014 - 08:05
Brief from client
Logotipo para una pequeña barberia local
Le cambié el símbolo.
Simplifiqué el símbolo enfocando sólo la cabeza para que se destaque el "cabello" del casco y parezca más a una "barbershop".
Adicioné un poco de color. Pero sólo un poco :D
Faltó por decir que el cliente no quiere en el logotipo nada de tijeras o cosas relacionadas directamente con "barbershop"
7 Comments
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How about you put a Crown, which means more Empire than a warrior. And another tip: use Google Translator or the Bing Translator, to make life easier for users of the site. I particularly use, because i only speak Portuguese.
Pusiste una corona, lo que significa más imperio que un guerrero. Y otro consejo: usar Google Traductor o el Bing Translator, para facilitarle la vida a los usuarios del sitio. Particularmente uso, porque sólo hablo a portugués.
Like that version more, the other one got to many details in it! Maybe u can add some joke, why dont u try a sword which cuts of the top of the Irokese...better connection between the word and blipmark.....
Like the colors, and enjoy ur font choice!!!
For those who want in english:
I changed the symbol.
I simplified the symbol focusing just head for the "hair" of the helmet stand out and look more like a "barbershop".
I added a little color. But only a little: D
Missed to say that the customer does not want the logo no scissors or things directly related "barbershop"
I actually think your image is a bit too detailed. The typography is great and could probably stand on it's own in certain situations. The image, for a logo, I think could be simplified a bit to keep the logo balanced. It's a great drawing, and I can see it being used as an info graphic, but for a logo, I'm not 100% sold on it. The typography and image feel like two separate items.
It's lost some of the spark from the first version.
Both have too much complexity in the illustration. I would work on simplifying the illustration by getting rid of lines, rather than cutting out the head.