Manzana Productions
eriksson2992 | Sat, 08/09/2014 - 09:00
Brief from client
Client wants an apple shaped logo to use as a small intro to his youtube videos. His nickname, Manzana (spanish for Apple) needs to be included.
corrected the apple shape.
3 Comments
This one looks most like an apple, but it looks more like a pumpkin than anything else, especially with that stem. Apple stems don't look like that- they are generally long and skinny (and brown).
I cannot unsee the fox/cat/dog shape in the negative space of the apple. It stands out way more than the apple does IMO. I think you could get it to look more like an apple and less of the fox if you took out the back "folds" and kept everything else as is.
overall i love the concept, i feel you need to get more of a natural apple shape to it, you are on the right track, it just needs some fine tuning! maybe sketch out that apple 100 times and get the best few and trace those for us :) just a thought lol also beef up the name just a tad.
I see bull inside (negative space).
Be carefull