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Aggressive logo for sportswear company (MMA,bodybuilding,street workout)

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I try to M symbol look like bodybuilder

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Joe White's picture
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It look's really dated to me.

I'm not a fan of the combination of typography, and that the shapes have some very rough and sharp edges as well as some very rounded edges.

I'd try to keep the M more legible and do lots of experiments with that as an icon.

Shawali's picture
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First of all, you don't 3 damn TM on your logo! =)

The weakest point in this logo is still the same from teh very beginning; the main font. First tracking is way too small and every character seem very contrived. Then there's more space between the M and its right leg than between any other character. It makes the whole thing wobbly and difficult to read.

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