My closet
brainworks | Tue, 02/07/2012 - 07:47
Brief from client
the client wanted an icon for a shop that sells clothes for women.
The icon is for a shop that sells clothes. It is called my closet located in Uganda ( East Africa) - so i used a condensed font since a closet is long and condensed - then i placed a door.
Guys tell me what you think.
7 Comments
The concept is not bad, but re-think the door thing in the O. In first read, it seems claset not closet.
I like your font choice, but the green... The client want some olive green in the logo - it's OK, but maybe less? Or maybe just the door?
^^Those two have the right idea. Give it a shot with the door as the 'o' in 'closet.'
it looks squeeze and it gets lost
i see where you're trying to get with the concept, it's not bad, i've seen great usage of it with negative spaces like the example below.
also like this one: http://www.edsuite.com/EDs/sites/default/themes/edsuite/images/portfolio...
the type is pretty thin, remember to take into consideration that when it is scaled down to a 3" version logo and printed on a shirt, how it would look.
i think the concept is not bad, but i think you need to simplify this execution.
i think just a hint of the green would be nice, client requested to use oliver green somewhere in the icon, everything appears to be green except the door. i think you can redesign this logo to a nice looking one.
sorry but it doesn't work for me at all if its a logo for clothes and style. i guess you should focus more on the subject of your brand instead of making your typo interesting by showing a door or something. a door connotes possibilities or a pathway which has no relevance for a clothes brand. Think on it. Good luck.
I igree with phino and lorewren, you must refine your idea and design.
don't like..nothing. sry