Skinlaunched Tattoo

It's obvious that you have skill however this is too much in my opinion..
The type is very hard on the eyes and it gets lost in the background.
I would suggest looking into other fonts and possibly using a different colour scheme. Check out Kuler by adobe for some ideas..
Also try the font with a flat colour without the shading.

Goodluck.

Does that say Skinlaunched?
If you stripped it right back to just a 2d font, it could look ok, but there's so much going on, it's difficult to tell.

I also think you need to get back to 2D text and lose the elements in the background. All they're doing is making it impossible to read your name.

It's horrible. You're breaking every single rule of logo design. Go back to a white sheet of paper and draw up ideas.

Hello, i think you have a very good skills in the tattoo area, but not necesary can put the same in a Logo, why?, becouse your logo is for all the people, not just for the tattoo fan persons, You need something more clean, more stilish, more fancy, why? because the 21 year girl what goes with you for your first tattoo, need some to dependable, not some scary, and the same logic with the full tattoo boy guy, need something readable, some with class and quality.

Good Luck and sorry for my bad english