BANK
sk irfan | Thu, 01/12/2012 - 12:34
Brief from client
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i know i know its a damn failure lol I've been told just now that tomorrow I have to present a logo of a bank of any name in my class I came up with this idea i used two "shield" to represent safety can someone give me any idea or how i can improve it thnxx in advance guys ;)
8 Comments
Black bar is laced poorly, also I dont think you need it
The colors are awe-full
The symbol needs to be re done
Loose the rectangle box
Choose a different font
thanx for your comment will try what you said thnx again appreciate it :)
Ok, I think you need to stop hyper producing logos like this.
What you need to do first is to get some good books on graphics and logo design and study them for a bit. Also some books on color theory and color harmony should come in handy too.
I totally agree.
Concordo con gli altri, anche se in un contesto diverso il font non è male, inoltre toglierei del tutto la cornice, è pesante, per una banca poi...
-Loose the line between Union and bank
-Use more inviting colours- These are too bright and don't work
-Change font, use a more professional looking font (preferably a serif font style)
-Change the whole concept of the logo mark it doesn't work or communicate anything memorable.
I see 5 shields, not only 2. One of them is a jousting shield.
I like the symbol, it brings innovation and elegance, i suggest you just change the green for another more serious. You can use the typography of your 6th desing for better result. :D