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GCellular
eriksson2992 | Fri, 11/16/2012 - 03:47
Brief from client
Simple logo used for my own cell phone retail store
Okay. I'm not going to say too much here, but I HAVE to say something.
While I definitely still see a few issues here (drop shadow, lil' kerning, symbol seems a titch boring!?) I had to give you HUGE PROPS for improving by leaps and bounds from the last version.
This is sooooooooooo much better!! I don't know what you did, or what you read, watched, etc- but holy shi!t this is a great improvement- great work!!!!
You sir (ma'am?) deserve a cold beer and a pat on the back.
I also agree with the previous comments. However you still may have to work on your symbol since its very generic as of now. The first thing that came to my mind was "straight talk" lol but that may be a good thing for your company.
i like this, apart from there s a couple of things wrong with it, Firstly the drop shadow, secondly all the "l's" are lower than the other letters which is wrong, letters with curves at the bottom should be slightly lower than letters with straights at the bottom. Thirdly you symbol isnt good and has been used before, i dont think you need a symbol as your letter "a" is a kind of symbol in its own write and can be used as part of your branding on its own. I would also changing the "C" to look more like the "G" in shape. Much better than your other versions though, just a bit of tweaking here n there and i think you'll have a fine logo
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Okay. I'm not going to say too much here, but I HAVE to say something.
While I definitely still see a few issues here (drop shadow, lil' kerning, symbol seems a titch boring!?) I had to give you HUGE PROPS for improving by leaps and bounds from the last version.
This is sooooooooooo much better!! I don't know what you did, or what you read, watched, etc- but holy shi!t this is a great improvement- great work!!!!
You sir (ma'am?) deserve a cold beer and a pat on the back.
Get rid of that godawful drop shadow effect and then we will see much clearer.
EDIT : I had never seen the other version, but so far I can tell this here logo is huge improvement. But still, the drop shadow has to go.
Oops...I uploaded the wrong file ha....it was suppose to be without the shadow....thanks gotta give credit to matttyson for helping me out here
I also agree with the previous comments. However you still may have to work on your symbol since its very generic as of now. The first thing that came to my mind was "straight talk" lol but that may be a good thing for your company.
I like the font, lets see a flat version now! :D
i like this, apart from there s a couple of things wrong with it, Firstly the drop shadow, secondly all the "l's" are lower than the other letters which is wrong, letters with curves at the bottom should be slightly lower than letters with straights at the bottom. Thirdly you symbol isnt good and has been used before, i dont think you need a symbol as your letter "a" is a kind of symbol in its own write and can be used as part of your branding on its own. I would also changing the "C" to look more like the "G" in shape. Much better than your other versions though, just a bit of tweaking here n there and i think you'll have a fine logo
My main problem is that Mattyson basically cut out the work for you by providing you with the font. Seems like all you did is add that bubble.
You should come up with something you really did yourself.