Redhead Companies
sealbee | Fri, 12/19/2014 - 20:00
Brief from client
Just playing around, no training in graphic design. Any feedback would be nice.
I'm not sure about kerning in companies, specifically between the a and p... what do you guys think?
8 Comments
But not that much red. I appreciated the gray to give it contrast.
(I actually posted this when you had both up; I liked the other one better)
Alright yeah, I'll definitely work on the colors. Thanks.
I must say, without any experience or training in graphic design, this is looking pretty good.
Two things : I would reduce the size of the symbol. You don't need it to be that big. It kinda fights with the word mark for attention.
Speaking of word mark, I'm not a fan of the weird looking i. Did modify it? Also, you wanna watch the kerning ie, the individual space between each character.
Good job overall, keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback.
Yeah I modified the i. I wasn't sure about it being full size going into the bottom of the A. I see your point though, the modification brings attention to it where there is no need. I'll play with it some more.
Good job.
The kerning between 'm' and 'p' is where i would add about 5(its the symbol typically to the right of the font choices that have "AV" in a gray box[if you are using adobe to create this])
I have to agree with swahili, that i is looking odd, if that is the normal font, try making the dot in the i smaller, right now it looks too heavy.
also bring back the grey, it brings good contrast, and stops the red from burning my eyes :)
The dot is actually the standard size, I truncated the stem however because I wasn't sure about it going into the bottom of the A above it. And yes I briefly tweaked the kerning but need to go back again.
Overall it's seems like I mainly need to nail down the colors. Thanks for the feedback.
i love this one! good job!!!!
(is it me or the i of companies looks funky? shouldn't the top of the i be on the same level as the other letters?)