Man Camp men's retreat logo
paintedjeff | Thu, 02/09/2017 - 23:27
Brief from client
just wanted something cool, masculine but hipsterish for a camping trip retreat for men 15-50 yrs old. Needs to be able to print well on t-shirt, used on social media, etc.
drew this by hand except for the font. and have cleaned it up a bit in AI. Pretty happy with it, just looking for other eyes that may notice something/feedback.
4 Comments
I'm loving this! Will be a great design on tshirts! My only beef is in the font- the two crossing lines in AN and AM start to make little booty shapes! I would keep it on the letter A and ditch it on the N and M. I think it will look cleaner. Totally digging the drawing- can't say I'd change anything there. Great Job!!!
Good job.
Pretty happy with it too.
I won't be as eulogistic as the others above. While I see what you were going for, which is pretty cool, the output isn't up to par, unfortunately
First off, I'm not sure what software you used to create this but it globally looks really bulky and lacks precision in the way it's drawn. In fact, it feels like it's been done in Paint.
While the word mark looks pretty cool on its own, the composition is just not happening. You have a lot of empty space inside the wolf, why not take advantage of it? The word mark placement is pretty awkward there, totally out of balance. Putting in the black space in the lower part of the symbol would be a good start.
This logo has potential but you're far from being done yet. Keep it up!!
I drew it by hand with pen and ink, then imported it into AI. I tried putting words in the wolf itself but I thought they interupted the design too much.