Brief from client
just wanted something cool, masculine but hipsterish for a camping trip retreat for men 15-50 yrs old. Needs to be able to print well on t-shirt, used on social media, etc.
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2 Comments
The idea is great, the moon-eye is awsome :-) the only thing i don't like is the amount of grungy lines: on the bottom and on the mountains. I suggest to clear the line on the bottom and add some more geometric shapes on the mountains. Also, get rid of this little bump on the right. :-)
it may be too late. :) though your advice is sound. But this was a pro bono job for my church and I think they are in process of getting shirts printed already. Thanks for feedback though, you were def. right about that bump.