My Design
TommySkills | Fri, 03/07/2014 - 05:52
Brief from client
This is a design for me to use on upcoming business cards and websites.. I want something modern that will stand out and look clean.. The 'T.Skillen' are my initials..
Here is an updated version thanks to all the constructive critique that I received here!
Let me know what you guys think of this version.. If anyone thinks it needs any critiques please give me your input! I enjoy working on little logos like this (gets me away from my usual work)..
Again thank you everyone! Look forward to hearing your feedback
- TS
13 Comments
the best so far! Cool, look at your progress ----------------------->
Haha thanks webhunter! I'm really happy with it! It was always going to be a battle making a 'T' and 'S' work nicely together..
Yeah, great to see the progress you've made Tommy.
Well done. Now on to the next project?
It sure is! Hopefully If I get some freelance work over the weekends I'll be able to design some logos as my company (RARELY) does logo designs :(
Well done, buddy. It is really cool to look at the versions and see this thing evolve.
Yeah I love how this website allows you to refer to previous versions next to it! Thanks for the critique along the way..
without the rectangle looks way better, good job!!
I agree!
great improvements throughout! the tracking in "Graphic Designer" looks a little too close together for me, each letter is almost touching the next one and it makes it harder to read. You still have 3 colours in the logo i would take it down to just 2, the blue and the green
I didn't comment on this logo so far, but I've been observing the progress and you did pretty good. I wasn't so sure about the first versions but the end result is really good.
My only concern is with the subtext. The kerning is really off and the tracking a bit too tight.
Other than that, good job.
Thanks for the Critique mate, I've made some adjustments to the text and taken on 'M@'s critique on the colour change.. Undecided on if I do drop it down to a Two colour Logo or stick with the 3 to keep the text more subtle..
i like this version best, id just make the symbol a tad smaller as it almost looks like its a big weight on top of the text trying to crush it :)
the choice of color make it look clomplete!!! Congrats! ;)