My personal brand
jogagra | Thu, 06/11/2015 - 22:52
Brief from client
My personal brand
taking into account some comments, I make this third version and see how we advance ...
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6 Comments
Yes, the J is more prominent here. A good step in the right direction.
Watch how close "publicity" is to your monogram. Give it some breathing room at the top, and also adjust your kerning a bit. The "TY" is too close together for my liking.
Again, good work.
If you see brother who looks better without the circle, but expect to see another font.
now i have a different perspective upon the font, is a curiosity of mine how it would look without color, just black and white, in a cricle. My personal opinion is that it would be better. Oh and the font :(\
too bad
This comment isn't really constructive. It's helpful to say what could be changed to improve it, or to mention one or two things that are strong. "Too Bad" sounds like you're flippantly dismissing someone.
I'm still not a fan, for the same reason as version 2. Plus, all the elements are way too cramped, it feels too claustrophobic.