ochoaguerrero soluciones gráficas
otxoa | Sun, 01/22/2012 - 03:47
Brief from client
a personal logo, for my bussines card, i´m a freelancer
Logo for personal use, i have used a sagativa font, i want to show a simple name but dinamic style.
10 Comments
I had a mistake in the name of the font, the font used is Saginaw
You were going for dynamic... but it looks messy to me.
If people are looking for a "graphic solution"- I don't think this would illustrate that. Sorry.
Thanks for your opinion about logo, its very important for me, I want make a good logo. i dont feel destroyed.
what you should do is go for a more cleaner, legible font. Like G13 this logo is going to be the first thing that portrays your whole work ethic and problem solving skills. It could be executed much better. Also loose the dark background and inject some more inviting colours.
Lo unico que no veo bien... "soluciones graficas" la tipografia fuera de lugar, no hay equilibrio,
The idea is common among freelancers who want to promote their business trough their name. In this case the font is too "crazy" and unreadable.
Perhaps a single name would be enough. Ochoa could be converted into "8A" (ocho a, in Spanish).
And doesn't Guerrero mean warrior or something like that? 8A with a warrior theme might be interesting.. ? ..
Not like a cartoon of a warrior.. but something symbolic.
Thanks, I have an idea with this elements, I go to do it as fast as I can
'get a redesign
I would suggest you read my critique for another personal logo here: http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/personal-identity
All that is said there basically applies to you too.