Sour Apple Cafe
Brookston | Thu, 01/23/2014 - 23:02
Brief from client
Independently owned cafe.
Upped the saturation for a richer color. Fixed the apple stem. Mirrored the bit in the 'C' to break up the weird triangle of space bellow the 'S'
9 Comments
Awesome Man!!
Really turned out well!
Why don't you make the apple like a C? The two bite marks are redundant.
still need to align the last to e's.
Looks cool, colour is better to definitely. :-)))
They are aligned! I swear
i checked on illustrator from the image on here, and if you look carefully, the bottom of the E is aligned, but the top isnt (dont know why) which gives that effect of it not looking quite right.
Does anyone else think this still doesnt look quite right???
Sorry, dont mean to be fussy!just trying to help :-)
Wow you're right! I would have never guessed just looking at it that the top of the E doesn't align with the bottom.
looking at this one against the other two you uploaded, i rekon you're very nearly there with this. looks good. perhaps just try some mock ups with it in use (you may have already).
I love it however, I don't like the bite out of the C. Over kill.
I agree with shawali and UrbanThink the bite in the C is more than redundant!!!!