PITAGORAS

Pitagoras, I dig it what you're trying to accomplish in here and it is a good start. Be careful with gem tear drops elements, as they're creating an " A " and you are striving for a " P " - right?

Well this way too illustrative to be part of a logo. But I'd like to see where you're taking it. Keep it up!

This is a very interesting illustration, but I'm afraid logos can't be that involved.

I'd like to see this as flat shapes with a controlled color palate. You can probably get away with a version with subtle gradients, but don't go too overboard.

I might get rid of those droplet things on the right. To me they seem superfluous and don't add anything.

It is a good concept but I think the same as Killswitch, this would be even more interesting if you do it with spot colors.

I would like to see a flat version of this.

Yup a flat version. That exactly what you need to do. Well said, Cesar =)

Firstly, solidify feathers coming directly from a bird's beak, make them thicker around a beak and thin down as they flow down. At some point indicate an eye with a negative space between feathers, but do not draw an eye on purpose. I wouldn't cut out that part of the " P " stem. In fact, I would make it more thicker and curved/arched more to a left part of a symbol to a mid point of a lower beak, because right now it is sticking to a bird's neck as a bayonet and doesn't look nice.Drop a small olive/green feather below the two extended ones, it doesn't serve any purpose and only in a way of that nicely flown motion in a center of a " P ". Speaking of a " P " - decrease a spacing on a stem part and make sure that all outline lines are done in the same thickness.Also, try to work on a beak's negative space and then decide if you want to duplicate that on a negative space between two extended feathers or you might go differently. Much better version this time, but more work ahead of you. Good luck.

the minus for the symbol, not because is a bad one but because is too complex. fewer feathers but more suggestive would help you solve this situation.

Why didn't you just create another post with the flat version? So we can compare and see how things change along the way.

I liked the colors I had before, but completely flat.