SEM 2
buzzroberts | Fri, 05/01/2015 - 21:11
Brief from client
Needs to look simple, clean, professional.
Needs to work on websites, in visual media (lower thirds and banners), and in print (letterheads).
Their eye can be reworked or continued to be used.
Resolving some Kerning issues.
Appreciate your feedback!
2 Comments
You get a thumbs up for sure on Typography now! I still like the colours, they go with your eye!
You're almost there.
I would try to drop the hexagon. If it doesn't symbolize anything consubstantial to the brand, you don't really need to have it. A circle would probably make the negative spaced eye more obvious.
Put a space between "Simple" and "Eye". Since you put "Media" on the same line with a space makes the whole thing look weird.
The small wave still isn't right. You need to fix that.
Keep it up!