Servants Heart by Design Logo

A bit easier to read; you seem determined to use this font as it is a personalization of yours...I wish you luck with it but:script can be tough to work with as a logo in all scales unless it's uber simplistic.look at your first s, it has a tiny bit of white background inside right now, especially on the bottom. it looks great on screen, but if you try to print it in small scale it may just turn into a smudge of black ink making it hard to read. I guess if you are attached to the thought of using your hand written script as a font for your venture you'll have to experiment with it.

The typo is bad and hard to read and if scaled down it could ruin design and the red line is not right it cuts it into separate parts; the by design i don't think needs to be part of logo; but i like the hart and colors overall its getting better. if want own hand writing maybe try a nice non cursive approach?

I agree with the others posting here about the logo font; it may not hold up well when scaled down to the size of, say, a business card logo. If you must have a handwriting font, you should make sure it is clear and legible at any size. I would recommend trying a non-script font out as well. Otherwise it's a great logo, though I have trouble seeing the differences in versions #2-5.

All other aspects good but I think you should try using other script font.

Good logo averall, but i disliked "idea" because im not sure about blood spray, how its assosiated with graphic\freelance?

It's clear to me that you made it directly on the screen. Try some handwork, use real ink drops on different kinds of paper, write the name with some different pens/pencils/brushes, see how it goes.

"by design"... no way!!! Use another font or simply remove it. It will look great!!!

I'm with everyone else..... The script is simply not working. Too many thick and thin and it just doesn't go. I don't mind scripts at all, but just not this one. Also, you may want to tighten up the kearning in by design, it's way too spread apart. Not sure if it's just me, but there also looks to be different weights in "by design". Something is definitely off. On a more positive note, I LOVE the splattered heart! Keep that!

the symbol / typing relation need to be modified.. i think the heart should be bit larger

nice work

As a graphic designer that you want to present yourself, you should make the impression you do neat and well designed things. The font doesn´t work well. Recommend to try cleaner approach. I like the hearth, but the font needs improvements. It s not legible, especially the -t- and -L- in servants hearth...

I would try how other similar fonts work with your letters. Choose well designed typo which is playful.

I'm downvoting this because you haven't changed anything but the ligature between the "r" and the "v", disregarding the thoughtful input of everyone posting here, and because I am a nazi about proper punctuation. Where's the apostrophe?

Very good